The writing ARGUH ! It's too telling, names repeated so many times, I know you are talking to Jody, Jon..." because you've told me 5 times already in the above paragraph. Arguh how many times do I have to hear about her sisters slutty clothing ? Then there is the fact they are half sisters, I know stop telling me over ! It's like she didn't have enough word count so she just repeated herself ?
Yes there have been funny parts but they are drowned in rehashed details